匯報(bào)時(shí)間：2022年12月08日20:00-21:30
匯報(bào)地點(diǎn)：騰訊會(huì)議 272-407-339
匯報(bào)學(xué)生：姚思棋
指導(dǎo)教師：李立平
匯報(bào)題目：《電力公司施工組織設(shè)計(jì)》（第四章第七節(jié)至第十一節(jié)）漢英翻譯實(shí)踐報(bào)告
參與導(dǎo)師：李立平、胥瑾、李虎
內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介：
本項(xiàng)目是華電集團(tuán)為埃塞俄比亞聯(lián)邦民主共和國(guó)亞的斯電力公司提供的施工組織設(shè)計(jì)。第四章為該項(xiàng)目的施工方案，具體內(nèi)容為建設(shè)電力公司綜合樓的土建、安裝等。源文本共5.1萬(wàn)字，譯者翻譯的選段是《電力公司施工組織設(shè)計(jì)》第四章的第七節(jié)至第十一節(jié)，約1.5萬(wàn)字，作為本次翻譯實(shí)踐報(bào)告的材料。其中，第七節(jié)為電力變壓器安裝、高低壓柜安裝以及防雷接地系統(tǒng)；第八節(jié)為鋼結(jié)構(gòu)安裝，包括鋼結(jié)構(gòu)安裝準(zhǔn)備工作和安裝工藝流程；第九節(jié)為腳手架及支撐搭設(shè)方案，包括腳手架材質(zhì)選用及質(zhì)量要求、落地式扣件鋼管腳手架計(jì)算書(shū)、搭設(shè)技術(shù)要求、腳手架的搭設(shè)及拆除施工工藝等；第十節(jié)為臨水臨電施工方案，包括臨時(shí)用水用電 和安全措施等；最后一節(jié)，即第十一節(jié)為季節(jié)性施工方案，具體包括雨季施工、防風(fēng)、防雷等舉措。
源文本屬于信息型文本，用詞科學(xué)規(guī)范，行文嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，邏輯性強(qiáng)。從詞法層面來(lái)看，源文本中包含大量工程類(lèi)專(zhuān)業(yè)術(shù)語(yǔ)（如剪刀撐、橫向水平桿、密目安全網(wǎng)、對(duì)接扣件等）；從句法層面來(lái)看，源文本中無(wú)主語(yǔ)句和長(zhǎng)難句偏多；從語(yǔ)篇層面來(lái)看，源文本屬于電力工程類(lèi)信息文本，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)規(guī)范，需要譯者對(duì)源文進(jìn)行準(zhǔn)確的理解與分析。
譯文修改：
例1：
ST: 根據(jù)埃塞國(guó)家要求，現(xiàn)場(chǎng)采用三相五線(xiàn)保護(hù)接零系統(tǒng)(即TN-S系統(tǒng))。結(jié)合現(xiàn)場(chǎng)實(shí)際情況，分五個(gè)回路供電，并采用三級(jí)送電，二級(jí)漏電保護(hù)。總配電箱中漏電保護(hù)器的額定漏電動(dòng)作電流為150mA，額定漏電動(dòng)作時(shí)間為0.2S，其額定漏電動(dòng)作電流與額定漏電動(dòng)作時(shí)間的乘積為30mA. S，未大于30mA. S，符合要求。
TT1: According to the national regulations of Ethiopia, the three-phase and five-wire protective neutral termination system (TN-S system) is adopted on the construction site. Based on the actual condition on site, the power supply is divided into five circuits, and three-level power transmission and two-level leakage protection are adopted. The rated leakage action current of the leakage protector in the main distribution box is 150mA, its action time is 0.2s. The product of these two is 30mA.S. If not greater than 30mA, it meets the requirement.
TT2: According to the national regulations of Ethiopia, the three-phase and five-wire protective neutral termination system (TN-S system) shall be adopted on the construction site. Based on the actual condition on site, the power is supplied by five circuits, with three-level power transmission and two-level leakage protection adopted. The rated leakage action current of the leakage protector in the general distribution box is 150mA, and rated time for leakage action is 0.2s. The product of these two is 30mA.S. If not greater than 30mA, it meets the requirement.
例2：
ST: 運(yùn)至地面的材料應(yīng)按指定地點(diǎn)隨拆隨運(yùn)，分類(lèi)堆放，當(dāng)天拆當(dāng)天清，拆下扣件和鐵絲要集中回收處理，應(yīng)隨時(shí)整理、檢查，按品種、分規(guī)格堆放整齊，妥善保管。
TT1: Materials delivered to the ground shall be removed and transported to designated places, stacked in different categories, and counted on the day. The removed fasteners and iron wires shall be collected and recycled. They shall be sorted and inspected, neatly stacked in time according to their categories and specifications, and then carefully preserved.
TT2: Materials delivered to the ground shall be removed and transported to designated places, stacked by category, and cleaned on the day of the removal. The removed fasteners and iron wires shall be collected and recycled. They shall be sorted and inspected, neatly stacked in time by species and specifications, and then well preserved.
例3：
ST: 按《規(guī)范》電焊機(jī)采用專(zhuān)用配電箱，箱內(nèi)設(shè)漏電保護(hù)器，并作到一機(jī)一箱一閘，交流電焊機(jī)還應(yīng)裝設(shè)二次防觸電保護(hù)器。
TT1: According to the Specification, a special distribution box shall be adopted/installed for the electric welder machine, which is equipped with leakage protector with one machine, one box and one shutter. The AC welding machine shall also be equipped with secondary anti-shock protector.
TT2: According to the Specification, the electric welder machine has its own special distribution box, equipped with leakage protector (one box and switch for each welder). The AC welder shall also be equipped with secondary electric shock protector.
研討反思：
通過(guò)此次翻譯研討會(huì)，譯者對(duì)翻譯的過(guò)程有了更深刻的認(rèn)識(shí)，也認(rèn)識(shí)到初譯文中存在的不足，以及如何改進(jìn)等。
第一、專(zhuān)業(yè)知識(shí)理解和閱讀平行文本的重要性，在此次翻譯研討的過(guò)程中，譯者發(fā)現(xiàn)自己對(duì)原文專(zhuān)業(yè)知識(shí)的理解有待提高，從而提升譯文的準(zhǔn)確度，比如，例2中的“當(dāng)天拆當(dāng)天清”，這里是指當(dāng)天清理運(yùn)至地面的材料，而不是清點(diǎn)材料。在老師的指點(diǎn)之下，對(duì)譯文做出了更改。
第二、保持科技英文的簡(jiǎn)潔特點(diǎn)，針對(duì)這一點(diǎn)，初譯文中有很多地方表達(dá)不夠簡(jiǎn)潔，用詞用句冗長(zhǎng)啰嗦，應(yīng)根據(jù)具體情況，使用代詞，從句，with引導(dǎo)的獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)等，從而使譯文更簡(jiǎn)潔明了，也與源文簡(jiǎn)潔的行文風(fēng)格相統(tǒng)一。
第三、術(shù)語(yǔ)統(tǒng)一，因源文本屬于電力工程類(lèi)文本，包含大量的專(zhuān)業(yè)術(shù)語(yǔ)，譯者需要在全篇，保持行文間術(shù)語(yǔ)翻譯的一致性，體現(xiàn)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)?shù)墓ぷ鲬B(tài)度，努力做出有質(zhì)量的譯文。
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